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23rd Hour


It's only 11 somethin' ; you still on my mind.
I know I think too much of our memorable times.
But I can't help if we had a hell of a good time.
 
Now it's 12 something and I can't get you out of my mind. 
Boy how times fly.
Times flying as You zoom past me.
As if I wasn't trying to let us be.
 
Now the next day is here.
And I wake up with you on my mind thinking outloud ... "Am I still on his mind?"
 
Day in and day out; I never stop thinking about you.
Even if I tried .
It's hard to let you go. Its unreal on how things ended; even though you pretended.
 
The things you thought.
Oh how was I not offended?
Clueless aren't you?
Turning the sky grey making it blueless.
The compression I felt in my heart turned into depression that teared me apart.
 
Yet you thought you had me stuck. But in reality I had you.
I got over the pain that you caused.
But then I pause, to hurt myself again thinking about those memorable times that happened at 11 something and ended at 12 something.
What a night to remember?
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