#4

by LJMazzle

July 27, 2012

"Your lips looks so lonely, would they like to meet mine?" "Well that sounds lovely, that idea's just fine."

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jwienerAug 11, 2012

You squeeze so many literary devices into this small poem it's amazing. You use alliteration in "lips looks so lonely" and you also use rhyme, dialogue, and a question too. Nice job!