4:30 am
Breathe in, breathe out. That's how it starts correct?
Open, close, in, out. All together now
Pushing, pulling, flexing, clenching, breathing
Wake up, sit up, think, blink, remember this?
The light, the touch, the weight of your eyelids
Heavy, droopy, slipping, shutting, closing
Falling back, collapse, can't you just go yet?
The feel, gentle, the noise, its violent
Pounding, whispering, silence, I'm breathing
Breathe in, breathe out. That's how it ends correct?
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