A Mother's Pain
A mother cries
Pain rippling through
Holding back screams
And a baby is born
A mother cries
When her baby
No more than five
Trips and falls
A mother cries
When her child
No more than ten
Is bullied again
A mother cries
When her boy
No more than 18
Is drafted to war
A mother cries
When her son
No more than 19
Sends letters of war
A mother cries
When her son
No more than 20
Sends letters no more
A mother cries
When a child is born
A mother cries
When they fall, play, and write
But the last time
Is different
Her child is no more
And a mother cries
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▾ This Poem's Voice
Your Poem's Voice
PersonalThemeAbstract
Autobiographical maternal grief; personal lived experience throughout.
SparseMeasureDense
Moderate idea density; repeated structure with incremental development.
DarkSentimentBright
Strongly negative; grief, loss, war, death dominate.
StillEnergyExplosive
Controlled, building intensity; restrained voice until final revelation.
MicroLengthEpic
31-60 lines; approximately 44 lines total.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Personification of pain rippling; metaphoric use of 'cries' layers meaning.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric voice; internal maternal consciousness throughout.
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