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A Silent Witness


On and off again Every twelve hours The view comes and goes Night and Day. Touching everything A silent bystander To the toils of men I am the sun, high above Witness to struggles To men trudging below And progress through the ages From baby to adult Witness to battles below Above sitting silent Knowledge overflowing No way to share Watching brothers and sisters Down far below Make the same mistakes As those before Sacrificing it all When a solution, Peaceful and Calm Was in reach Witness to struggle Rifle and cannon shot Mountains of bodies Knowledge overflowing Listening to the screams Lost among others Watching them end One with the others Witness to pain To brothers killing brothers Friends turned on friends Connections lost Sitting high above Sitting on knowledge Of decades and centuries A Witness to the wars
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Abstract philosophical meditation on witness and knowledge, minimally personal

SparseMeasureDense

Moderate density; repeated witness concept with varied observations per stanza

DarkSentimentBright

Strongly negative; focuses on war, suffering, death, helplessness, tragedy

StillEnergyExplosive

Moderate intensity; tense subject matter tempered by still, observational voice

MicroLengthEpic

41 lines; falls in 31-60 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Strong personification of sun; metaphor of witness; minimal other ornamentation

LyricVoiceDramatic

Dramatic persona (the sun) observing; lyric internal voice merged with character

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