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muizz (Mark)
Im a seventeen year old who had a passion for writing since the 4th grade I thought it was going to take me somewhere seeing that I was the only boy who couldn't play sports who was born with a soft soft voice and remains misunderstood I have spent my childhood trying to escape every comer of it yet still I have gotten nowhere I still have big dream like making children's dream come true and going to America
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Personal struggle with universal overtones; grounded in autobiographical experience with some philosophical reach
Multiple interconnected ideas: burden, perseverance, dreams, potential. Dense but meditative pacing.
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Determined, steadfast voice with building intensity; restrained but purposeful momentum
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