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AA The fallen tower


AAAAAAAThe fallen tower

I built my life around u until them walls came falling ...built my life around u then them stones become rumble...built my life around u now its over how can I explain these feelings in me...
Well I built them walls to my life based on our love thought it was a true love one from up above but then it all feel from the heavens up above who knew falling from an angels grisp would only lead to a flat landing a flat end I hope and pray when this concrete I meant I fall not on my face but that I land back on my feet I'm getting a taste of reality but without u I can't breath so it seems like our love. I won't last forever in reality so I close my eyes and lift my head and pray its just a dream. Cuz i once was told everything isn't wat it may seem and all that glitters ain't gold that's how the stores told in with the new out with the old its like my soul has been sold and my heart snatched away from me deep down no escape i could reach so i pray to the lord may my path and soul he keep so preach
Chorus 
Sometimes it feels like I'm falling and sometime i realize she's calling but i don't answer cuz the wounds already a deep heal i expressed my feeling but its my love she didn't feel neglect hurt pain and confusion but it seems its all on a fusion I'm tripping I'm falling to the ground i reach for some help but they all outta bounds so i look to heaven were my forever love is found
Rap
Some say its all about Jesus but yet my paths already chosen its built in these words that r spoken like a bridge... okay now listen its not the words that r spoken its these words that r chosen to find my way out this valley this waste land I'm in...its like I'm the titanic and I'm sinking nobody left to help me no party guest to help me I'm drowning someone please save me...I'm in a dessert its a barren waste land she took my heart with her just let go of my hand she's like a suckubist one kiss one suck and she's finished she take ya heart and leave ya there relentless i repent this i kept the love a secret but victory had nothing on u so just like a magician i revealed my own secret i ain't illuminati

 

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