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ABANDONED FOREST


Passes as ever the wind

Jumping on each branch

Jumping like my heart

I Tried to understand why trees and earth

were not as I thought

It was like trying to understand

Why leaves fall in autumn

Like this is life

My eyes are of winter

That always carry the cold

That love has given me

But they are brown

Because explained autumn leaves

Which have fallen from my soul

Wanting a true love of those that passionate

With the look of a deep lake

I am an abandoned forest

No one comes here

To put themselves in my place

But all judge my wetness

Everyone wants to rip leaves to my tree

No watering my bushes

Caresses my skin of wood with joy

Neither gives me fresh water of love

Neither words of love

I am an abandoned forest

Nobody see the love in me

nobody sees the greatness in me.

- Jonatan Vega

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Jonatanvega

Hello my name is Jonatan Vega as you all see I love poetry.My favorite languages are Spanish,French,English and some Italian,but my first language is Spanish.I live in US but I am from México.I am a college student at American River college in Sacramento,CA.I consider myself as very talented.I am very confident.I am kinda quiet,but when you get to know me I am amazing.I consider defining what the soul feels is art:poetry.I am a painful poet most of the time,but I could write about everything when I put that objective in my mind.I love love for what it is.i am a amazing person if you get to talk to me Some of My work focuses on what I see as the repression of women by men. This often takes the form of personal insults directed at men in general Love,Heartbreak.life changed my writing by helping me to lose my former models, and reach a more dramatic lyricism, my style now showed more realism than before.Recurring themes in my work include love,hearbreak,humanism, nature, alienation,loss, love, pain, growth, hope,death, family, sorrow, women’s issues, and violence.Although my portrayal of men is ironic and critical,I felt a strong need for love, and Im able to express the tension and passion these ambivalent feelings in poetry both simple and deeply sensual, expressing an original note in erotic poetry in a sensitive manner. . Facebook: @Jonatan Vegâ poeta instagram: @Jonatanvega_writesbooks Twitter:@Fearlessvega Any thing you want to know feel free to ask

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