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Abandoned heart


Im strong, im willing , but alone my heart is failing,

to feel lonelimess is not the worst ,

but knowing that you dont come first to the ones who have given you life.

abandon is how I feel.

 

My poem might not be the best but my heart has already been in a test

to succeed and find the love it wants to achieve but it cant.

You left me, Both of you , Mommy and daddy , you two.

You took away the love that I was so accustomed and left  me with hate.

But I cannot debate

it made me stronger it made me willing , but it also made my heart unfullfilling.

you abandoned me and you abandoned my heart.

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Deciabon221
<p>This was the first time i have ever written about my mother and father being taken away from me so this was kind of hard.</p>

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