Achieve-less
Proverbs 29:11
11 A fool vents all his feelings,
But a wise man holds them back.
Achieve-less
What is success … and in whose eyes?
Is it an emotion … a fulfillment of pride?
May be a craving for recognition?
Who knows best … in choosing what’s right?
A form of devotion … a longing for might?
May be flesh’s reminiscing?
What is satisfaction … in what perspective?
Is it a hunger … a form of appetite?
May be feeds on the inner-being?
Is it a distraction … from living effective?
Traveling on … on just compromise
May be so seldom disagreeing?
Where is Godliness found … on flesh’s pathway?
Is it following ruts of them … that went before?
May be blinders on the eyes?
Hand in hand with loneliness … hidden along the way
To get pushed astray … through blisters and sores
May be from true insight?
Circling through life … to escape from the past
Always winding up somehow … close to where you started
May be in the familiar?
Strangled by inner strife … that closes in too fast
Contradictions line up … in thoughts to be discarded
May be in the now and the prior?
Jan Wienen
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