Achilles' Elegy
My Patriocles, what have I done to you?
How have I abandoned you in your hour of need,
And saved myself at your expense?
When I discovered the news of you, my heart broke into two;
To the gods, I asked your life be returned in exchange for mine, I plead
In the cries and roars most intense.
And to this day, I swear, I shall never find someone new
And no matter how absent in may be, your touch I will always need,
For the absence of it shall be my penitence.
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