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Addiction

by TriNitY4eVr

Getting High;To feed this f*ckin Addiction;While life goes on;Long enough, instead i could be resting;My brain says, Yes & my heart says, Not yet!;God, I'm not finished.. I wont give up;Would you consider a Miricle?;Or just wish me Luck?;The needle in my life, its what i truly love;The dangerous drug, i wish not to give up;Help is needed;To stop this bleeding!;To fix me screaming!;Divided  in two;Watching my spirit slowly leaving;Hurting & burning.. Get these demons off me;Look what Heroin has caused me!;A young kid who shouldnt be a fein;If you have this to read, hopefully you see what i mean!;



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I express my Heart.. What I feel & My emotions! I enjoy writing & playing inside my head. I speak the truth & tell you not to give up.. Life is better then anything you could possibly imagine, so live young! & Live Free! So read my Poems, & you'll explore the mystery of inside my mind! =D

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<p>Hi there,</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>FIrst of all, I am so sorry it took so long to get back to you--I must have read your mentor request and then become distracted and then...well...here I am.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>I love the line "The needle in my life, it's what I truly love"...powerful. I think, in order for this poem to be completely effective, you need to decide what emotion you want to convey--are you angry at yourself? at your addiction? are you all right with it?</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Keep writing!</p>

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