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Admiration


Who do I admire the most?

The person I love the most.

Who do I love the most?

The person who cared, loved, and understood me...?

 

She is someone who I see every day.

Her pretty dark brown eyes shine like gold when the sun hits them.

Her skin--so soft and gentle like baby's skin.

The way she cuddles me in her arms

feels like a teddy bear.

At 8:00 at night she talks to me about anything.

I tell her how much I love her,

express my feelings to her. 

She understands me.

 

When I cry

she makes me feel better.

Every time she is sad, I make her feel better by loving her.

When she has a stressed out day,

I help her out and make her feel better with a hug and kiss.

 

This person who has done so much for me

must feel lucky to have me in their lifetime.

and I'm proud to have them in my life, too.

 

Who is this person that I love the most?

Who is this beautiful woman I care about the most?

When I see her again today,

I would like to say "Thank you--

thank you for everything you have done for me."

 

I love you mom.

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