ALMOST PARADISE
Almost Paradise
As brothers and sisters was walking around
Through the hills and valleys of truth ,
Suddenly as we passed a lake, I noticed a big
Group of yellow daffodils waving in the breeze.
I was amazed of Jehovah's grace of the love he
Even had for the daffodils that are playing on
The hill ;
This wasn't just some scattered patch of daffodils.
As we talking to thousands and thousands around
This particular bay. I could see Jehovah's love
All these flowers were dancing about ;
They war amazement to my eye's , It was like I could
Almost see what Paradise would be like ,
The daffodils danced, and so did the waves of the Sea
Oh what a beautiful breeze ,
The pain I once was holding in my heart ,
Left me with out a mark , loneliness was replaced by joy,
Now, whenever I feeling kind of blah, I just thinks of the daffodils,
And Jehovah's love this is a gift from heaven above .
Lilly Emery (C)
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Poetic Judy Lilly Emery
To all my readers you may see that their are grammar errors in my old writings, but these writing are from the 90's ,2000's. I truly didn't think anyone was readying my work . so I just started writing out what I felt and made my pains a story and poems . I had re post these poems and stories all over the internet and I keep them also in file so no one can ever say my work is theirs . I have kept my work as they are just for others to see where it was I started my writing at . The pains are so real not even a game ,The life I had lived I would never wish upon no one . I like to say to all who are taking the steps for change in their life congratulations to the new open doors God bless you . You may have seen my photos on the internet and my writings on Poetry.com and poem hunter etc. you may have seen the hate that others have given to me about my work and my beauty of who I am . But as you can see I will never let the haters Stop me from doing what I love . So I say the same to all of you write your own words and let your heart speak to all your readers . I hope you can understand why I haven't made changes in my work at less not the old ones . My old work are left as they are for me to always remember where it all came from . God bless to all who reads . Lilly Emery /Judy Emery
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