Alone

Location

78357
United States
27° 57' 37.7856" N, 98° 35' 38.6916" W

Without you I am nothing
Yet my souls constantly needing something
Fills its depths hopping
To satisfy the void that truly longs for you

The light that fills my world with you
Over whelms me there is nothing I can do
Yet I lost you the one who
Greatest as could be slipped through my fingers
Like sand through the everlasting hands of life

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very heartfelt

very emotionally meaningful

this must've been a special person in whom this poem is about

keep writing

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