altitude
altitude.
{you, i} gasp for air
{i am, you are} used to the thickness
the sweltering heaviness
of life down below.
but up here
{we are} free.
{we have} grown.
gaining ground may leave {us}
gasping, breathless.
but {we} will adjust.
keep climbing.
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