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Always Remember me


His eyes are as deep as a mud fiddle Hair more soft than newborn kittens fur Hands long and lengthy, around my little Clear tears begging me not to leave at his new her Fresh shaven face beet red, shaking with real fear But no rejection will he ever see Because I love him too much to tear Love knows no bounds to push him off glee I hate to see him cry, yet it is real Now I understand him, more than ever I wish nothing but the very best for zeal Always remember me, thus forever And yet, I know our love cannot compare You kiss my tears from the salty fresh air
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QV
<p><span style="font-size:16px;"><span style="font-family:times new roman,times,serif;">I enjoyed your piece, the imagery is original and attempts to break from the cliches created in adolescent poetry :) There are moments such as in the second line where I feel the thought is incomplete, but this could be your technique to carry the piece forward. Keep on writing. Q.V.</span></span></p>

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