The Anatomy of Your Subconcious
You open your eyes and its dull and grey.
Your lost within your own subconscious.
You don't know how you got there or how your going to escape.
You suddenly begin to feel alone and then you wonder,
has life always been like this.
You wonder if you the reason why your hear
or if this is some kind of strange dream.
You begin to cry.
Realizing theres nothing left you submit yourself
into the darkness of your subconscious.
Something is keeping you from going into the dark.
You open your eyes again and its still dull and grey.
In the distance though there's a small light.
Your subconcious tells you to go toward it.
So you do.
As you get closer you see what appears to be the human form of
your subconcious.
You just stare at your subconcious and then you ask
Is my subconcious what brought me to this place.
Theres a flash and then your brought back to reality.
Released from your subconcious.
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