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" The Angel's Pillows"


Like foam on the ocean the clouds drift by theirs is a vast sea the blue of the sky. Like foam on the ocean changing form with the breeze, such are the clouds in the sky's blue seas... But here, you will find no ships, or fish swimming by only things that are able to fly- birds, hot- air balloons, or a fast jet plane; the clouds are so beautiful, they're the source of rain. So cottony and plush they float and billow- I wonder if a cloud is an angel's huge pillow? And their beauty pleases me so very much- like the beauty of all, that we cannot touch. Such as God, hope and the joy of love- all of my inspirations along with the clouds above.
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Annette M Velasquez

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Annette M Velasquez
This is one of my first attempts at writing... I'm digging into very old notebooks. Look at my changing style as compared to my newer poems. This was written around age 19, 20.

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