the animal fair

Mon, 12/17/2018 - 17:42 -- 745350

there is a place called the the animal fair

were all the animals go

to play all day and have lots of fun

with the big red  balloons.

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745350

that's a great poem

745350

 when i was little, i looked in the sky and saw nothing.

There was blackness, no light, just drakness. It made me dream of things that made

people happy.  so there brightness could come in just a little. i thoulght 

doing this would make me happy, but it got so dark, no one could get in.

loney, loney,loney

which echos in my head, the voices just won´t seem to stop 

it keeps me locked in my own sadness

when i was a teen, i use to be happy.

I waited and waited but still no light

My sadness never seem to go away 

when i grow up, My jaurney begins and all my worries disappears. 

 

 

 

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