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The Architecture of a smile


I am a girl wondering what it feels like to wear a white coat of my own.

Like the first snow falling on a new York street,

I dream of a tomorrow I hope 

will come. I work so hard to earn a seat at the table, 

While only the night knows the tears on my face.

I've been called silly, told i was worth nothing,

A pain that was aching deep in my heart.

That I came from a faraway land, saying 

goodbye, 

Travelling across the world to reach for the starts.

Sometimes my dream feels unreachable, 

But my heart tells me I can't give up now.

In a world of strangers, I felt that I might not succeed.

Conversation I couldn't understand, And the silence that grows when money 

is tight.

But i want to lend my hand and help others,

To find the strenght to pursue this running start.

Then came a saver in a write shirt, giving me the oxygen of a new tomorrow.

I will never forgot that bright, write snow

The color of a uniform, and the color of a smile.

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Melissa Altidor Richemè

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Primarily personal aspiration; medical career dream grounded in autobiography

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas densely packed: struggle, discrimination, determination, gratitude

DarkSentimentBright

Negative experiences offset by hopeful resolution and gratitude

StillEnergyExplosive

Emotional intensity with urgent language; some quieter reflective moments

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 26 lines; falls in 16-30 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Strong metaphors: white coat, snow, oxygen; personification of night and heart

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure first-person lyric internal voice throughout; no dramatic persona

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