Arguments
Some people are jealous
so they argue
about friendship freedom and life
they turn best friends into enemies
one day
they will soon shrug it off
but the memories the nightmares
will never vanish
youll hold grudges
to one
another
so please listen
and talk
out the jealousy
put what ever is behind your mind
in fire in flames
then blow it out with a deep breath
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Personal conflict scenario with some universal advice about jealousy and friendship.
Multiple ideas per 10 lines: jealousy, friendship loss, memory, grudges, resolution technique.
Negative problem setup, hopeful resolution advice creates balanced emotional tone.
Imperative commands and breath imagery create moderate intensity; not explosive but active.
Approximately 13 lines; falls in 7-15 range.
Personification (memories/nightmares haunt), metaphor (fire/flames for releasing thoughts), breath imagery.
Primarily lyric/advisory voice with direct address; minimal narrative or dramatic elements.
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