Atlas
Young handles on a vessel of immaturity
Cared for by the wrinkled intelligence of a grandmother
One young woman educated by the other
Told to care, told to love
I was this vessel: an amalgamation
Of all the world’s influence
Who did not heed the warnings of the experienced
Who cared for me with pursed lips
And loved me regardless
Mischief and influence
Threatened to bring me to ruin
I was careless, intolerant
Poisoned by misgivings, doubt
Broken by sadness
Cracks set in
Wrinkled hands held the handles of the young
Even as their rough and dry skin
Cracked under the pressure
Like a potter she removed the vessel’s tears
Like Atlas she made me the sky
And held me up
One young woman educated by the other
Taught to care, taught to love
The sun rose and the sun set
I saw her struggle and her sadness
Purged the immaturity of my vessel
And filled it with intelligence,
Kindness, sympathy
And the means by which I could
Pardon her burden with my own strength
No longer condemned to hold up the heavens
She stepped down from her post
I took her wrinkled hands
And encompassed her in the sky’s warmth
The vessel, constructed by-
Rather, broken by sadness falls apart
But a new vessel is born
Full of love for the world
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