the attack

a bad deed done for a good cause is still bad,

violence is never the answer opening your heart up to causes is better,

all of those people that were killed that's sad,

or adrressing the issue to the senator in a letter.

 

blood rained down everywhere,

people ran,looked but all some could do was just simply stare,

while the nation acts like they don't care,

but so many people have a story of a loved lost one to share,

the stories go unheard so,does that really seem fair?

 

 

 

 

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