attempt at perfection

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Watch it ease on up to ya,
terrific slice of madness.
Simple words,
with deeper meaning,
stretching for immaculacy,
restless from blemish.

The best, no less.
Give it all, or fall.

Valued more than yourself,
privileged to watch from hell;
a demon’s dream,
not to pierce this angel’s wing.

Persisting.

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