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Autumn's Child



Autumn’s Child lives across the creek,

Among leaves of fire and blood

And Autumn’s Child creeps beneath the trees,

And paints his face with mud

 

The burning forest is his kingdom,

The golden meadows, his domain

And when the wind blows crisp and cold

Autumn’s Child calls down the rain

 

Through storms of amber leaves he stalks,

And whispers warnings to the wild things

Amid mushroom rings he sits and talks,

And advises the birds take wing

 

With haunted eyes and heavy heart,

Autumn’s Child will watch and wait

And when the shadows solidify,

Autumn’s Child will know his fate

 

One dawn will break Winter’s window,

And glass dust will frost the land

The ice will spiderweb the trees

Alone, Autumn’s Child will stand

 

Autumn’s Child will die across the creek,

Upon the skeletons of faded leaves

And Autumn’s Child will sleep until

His season wishes him breathe

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TevaMayer
<p>I'm glad the imagery came across well! As a writer you never know if your readers will pick up on it! Thanks so much for your comment!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>hehe thanks!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thanks! The endings are always a bit tricky, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!</p>
Po3tryL1k3Th15
<p>This poem is AMAZING!!!!! I read it almost everyday I especially love how you ended it!&nbsp;</p>
Delaney_rose
<p>Wow..... Amazing.</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
Ellie Kleinatland
<p>The imagery is amazing! I saw Autumn telling the birds to fly south and everything. &lt;3</p>
Ellie Kleinatland
<p>The imagery is amazing! I saw Autumn telling the birds to fly south and everything. &lt;3</p>
TevaMayer
<p>I am so glad you love it! Thanks so much!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Oh my goodness thank you so much!&nbsp; If you want to really read the best poem ever, check out The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by T.S. Elliot!&nbsp; Haha if I ever have a book published, I'll let you know! :P</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thanks!!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thank you so much for your comment and feedback!&nbsp; I find that when the words and rhythm come effortlessly, that's when it's a poem worth saving.&nbsp; If it feels forced when you write it, odds are it's going to come across as forced to the reader!&nbsp;</p>
TevaMayer
<p>I can't really remember but I think I added it as media? Sorry I cant be more help haha</p>
TevaMayer
<p>:)</p>
TevaMayer
<p>I'm so glad you love it! And it's funny how much I'm inspired by myths and magic as well as nature haha I'm glad you piced up on the vibe I was going for! Thanks for your comment!</p>
Transyl_Vannah
<p>I absolutely love this poem. The personification, details, imagery.&nbsp;</p><p>It's truly beautiful.</p>
AAshbrook448
<p>This is the best poem. Ever. EVER. I'd buy a book with this poem in it. Just saying.&nbsp;</p>
Grayson920
<p>This is absolutely beautiful!</p>
bellamildew
<p>Wow, this was beautifully worded and measured. Your word choice was wonderful and the ease with which you found words to rhyme that didn't seem forced was incredible. Effortless, actually. The imagery was startlingly vivid, and in the end kind of sad. But so beautifull. Wow</p>
GtMan95
<p>Haha yeah; do you post the picture seperately, or use the add media icon?</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thanks so much! and how do you mean? how did i post the photo?</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thanks!!</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
GtMan95
<p>That's a beautiful Poem! How did you get the picture like that?</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thanks!!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>awwww thankkkkssss!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thank you!&nbsp; I'm glad it was able to make you feel and take you on a journey!!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thanks!! I absolutely love Nature...I find it's my main source of inspiration for most of my art and writing!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Lyrical poems are my favorite sort :D It's what I'm the best at writing!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thanks! And yes, I took that photo :P I'm also an aspiring photographer!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thank you!!</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Haha thanks!&nbsp; And I dont really know!&nbsp; Whatever I end up doing with my life, writing will always be a part of it, that's for sure!</p>
Mafi Grey
<p>Just a beautiful poem&nbsp;</p>
Mafi Grey
<p>Just a beautiful poem&nbsp;</p>
livieMarie
<p>speachless .</p>
Julie.v
<p>Amazing- breathtaking. I love the journey it took me on!</p>
a.lee1
<p>Your poem is absolutely beautiful! The picture fits your words perfectly. Your work seems so genuine and so understanding of nature&#39;s majesty and mystery.</p>
Grahamacre00
<p>So lyrical</p>
Isabella293
<p>The personification of Fall was executed cleverly. I really enjoyed this poem. By the way, did you take that picture, or did you find it? It&#39;s just because I thought it fit the poem and it looked interesting from the perspective it was taken.</p>
angelalewis
<p>Absolutely beautiful poem! The images are fantastic. Bravo!!!!!</p>
risum.lupus
<p>I love this poem! It&#39;s classic without being a boring look-alike. The way you&#39;ve written it reminds me of legends and folklore and prophecies. This is just really beautiful. Thanks for sharing it&nbsp;<img alt="smiley" height="20" src="http://www.powerpoetry.org/sites/all/libraries/ckeditor/plugins/smiley/images/regular_smile.gif" title="smiley" width="20" /></p>
Daraniashley
<p>Your poem is the bomb.com......I&#39;m seriously in love.</p><p>Are you going to become a writer?</p>
marie
<p>And this one, to get started! http://www.powerpoetry.org/actions/making-multimedia-poetry</p>
marie
<p>Hi Teva--Rebecca meant recording your poem (voice or a performance) so that we can hear what it sounds like :) If you&#39;re interested, check out our tip guide on making multimedia poetry: http://www.powerpoetry.org/resources/multimedia-poetry</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thank you so much for your feedback! I&#39;m glad you enjoyed the poem!</p>
EmRose
<p>Very vivid. I love your descriptory words, &quot;burning forest,&quot; &quot;glass dust,&quot; etc... Makes me anxious for fall and sort of already miss it at once. It&#39;s hard to write new and unique nature poetry, but you&#39;ve done it.</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Hi!</p><p>I&#39;m sorry for such a late reply and I don&#39;t even know if this opporunity is still available! But what exactly is your multimedia?&nbsp; I&#39;m obviously new to Power Poetry haha :P</p>
TevaMayer
<p>Thank you so much!!</p>
RebeccaYSPerez
<p>Hello TevaMayer! I&#39;m an intern here for Power Poetry, we were truly hoping we could use this for our multimedia? Of course we will always cite you as the author.</p><p>Becca.</p>
RebeccaYSPerez
<p>I absolutely love your personification of the season! I can just picture a little child running around doing all of this! It&#39;s absolutely adorable. (It&#39;s like a little movie in my head) I really want to read more of your work, any you suggest?</p><p>Becca.</p>
lizardoa21
<p>Poems about nature with such beautiful imagery must be an all time favorite. My favorite lines would have to be &quot;one dawn will break winter&#39;s window, and glass dust will frost he land, the ice will spiderweb the trees. Alone, autumn&#39;s child will stand.&quot; absoulutely beautiful i look forward to reading more from you.</p>

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