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Wed, 11/29/2017 - 03:14 -- MARs

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I'm ok



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I'm fine



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I'm good



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I need help



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Not that help



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Yeah it's fine



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I'm doing better



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Are you convinced yet



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I whisper



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I'm lying



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Just keep smiling.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Faith will always help get through tough time

don't let anyone ostracize you or make you feel worthless

read Romans 5:8

remember that Jesus died for us despite the fact that we are sinners

you continue to press on and move forward

unique and great poem

MARs

Thank you so much!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Anytime

ValanThia VV

AMEN TO THAT 

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