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you told me to stop looking back,

part of me knows your right,

but determination to only look forward I lack,

perhaps oneday I really might.

 

I'm living a dead life everyday,

this and that and demands,

listenings to all they say,

following soo many comands,

god my life is in your hands.

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Iḿ M, I like reading, writing, cooking, acting, and helping others. Good luck to other poets out there, and never give up on your dreams. No matter how hard it seems.

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