Back and Forth
Back and Forth
We only want you to be happy
If you don't do this you'll never get anywhere
We love you
I don't trust you
What do you all mean?
What do I need to do?
How
Do
I
Please
You?
Because I can't
Nothing I try does it
Nothing can stop this plague of doubts
I'm trapped in these bars of my own doubt
and you just build them up.
Help me, save me,
Acknowledge things I do right
Please?
Because my whole life has been devoted to pleasing you
and
it
never
seems
to
work
We're proud of you
You're pissing all this away
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