Backwards Waterfall

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The hurtful things you say bring me down in a special way.

my heart can't take no more of this punishment you endure.

You think I'm something edible that you can chew up to bits,

i'm already decomposed of the words that you spit.

I'm 7 feet underground, the exstra foot is what i digged.

You view me as a bighorn sheep, I'm extinct and our relationship will never again be interlinked.

you can be so unreal like the velveeten rabbit, i ddon't even under stand when you say i have a habit.

I'm not pinocchio, but i feel more like dumbo

Because i really want to know if theirs a place out there were i won't be misled in my naive young head that the mistakes that i did was wrong.

where my gaurdian won't trust me enough, and rather just judge me. that I'm accident waiiting to slip and fall.

caution I'm prone to fail because I'm simple-minded and my in life is like a child talking to a stranger that wants to give me a ball.

i feel like I'm endangered and i have no were to turn at all. because my mind his like a backwards waterfall.

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