bathroom floor

Location

53511
United States
42° 31' 39.4608" N, 89° 4' 30.9" W

although the room is spinning,
your legs begin to shake,
put down the bottle and razor,
this decision you're about to make.
sit down on the bathroom floor,
it's cold and a little damp,
don't think about school or friends,
turn off every lamp.
Remember every good time, every smile, every hug,
you don't need to do this, lie down on the rug.
Breathe slowly and remember that this will never be the end,
if you would have done this, i'd have never seen you again.

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