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Be Careful When You Play Outside


Everyone Says School's Are Hard,

But For Me School's Are Dark,

Be Careful When You Play Outside,

Because Sometimes It Won't Be Nice,

 

Everyone Goes Outside To Have Fun,

But For Me We Should All Run,

It's Like Were Playing Hide N Seek,

So Don't Get Caught Or Your Going To Bleed,

 

I Can See A Person With A Gun,

I See Them Shooting One By One,

Someone Just Turned To Me,

But Luckily I Climbed A Tree,

 

I Waited Until They Left,

It's Like Were Having A Test,

I Heard A Car Drive By,

But I Still Waited Like A Spy,

 

I Can See Lots Of Swats,

Then They Fought, Fought, And Fought,

I Thought We Were All Gone,

I Then Jumped Off And Landed On The Lawn,

 

Be Careful When You Play Outside,

Because Sometimes It Won't Be Nice.

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Comments (10)

Adrian Lozano
<p>I really like the rhyming in the story. -Sonia Patlan</p>
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<p>I like the rhyming-joshua</p>
Adrian Lozano
<p>I like how you named you poem &quot; Be careful when you play outside.&quot; Manuel</p>
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<p>Goodjob like the ryming in the poem,Exallent-Evelin :)</p>
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<p>i like your poem.-lia</p>
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<p>I like that your porm ryhmes a lot-demarice+</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
Adrian Lozano
<p>Bravo!I actually love it, it is better than mine-Ulisses</p>
Adrian Lozano
<p>I like your rhyming skill and spelling.</p><p>-Ulises Castaneda Mendoza</p>
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<p>hello</p>
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<p>hi</p>

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