Be Real With Me

Thu, 12/19/2013 - 09:38 -- Allyson

Heres a story like to tell


about this boy i thought i knew so well


thought he was the one for me all the other boys i couldn't see


it should have been me and you i could have been you and i


but when you left all i could do was cry


but all i got is these photographs


i mean like we fell in love all we have was love


now my heart wont beat cause you couldn't be real with me


the pain is killing me


so what was your reason you went around putting in down in every girl


so you come home to me when you was denied


silly little me i would accept your entrance


cuddled up in  your room was your chance to be real with me


so instead we dance under the moonlight  and danced in the water


and you looked at me


that when i saw in your eyes


it was over


but you insisted to tell me you loved me  more than anything


Why why couldn't you just be real with me?

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

what's done in the dark will come to light

always remember that the truth unveils

keep writing, great job

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