Benny's Rebuttal
I like how you tell me,
in so many removed terms,
that I'm falling apart -- as if
I don't know it's wrong
to savor the scent of my sweat,
or I'm not aware
that my house is the line
between what happens
when I do what I'm told
and what it feels like to collect
the names you give me.
I wear them like I'd wear
a winter coat, or just six shirts;
with enough layers,
maybe I'll feel warm enough
to convince someone
I'm not alone.
👁 4💬 0
Something wrong with this poem?
Replies are closed for this poem.
Your Poem's Voice
See what makes your poem unique — its voice, energy, themes, and the literary traditions it draws from.
Comments (0)
No comments yet. Be the first to share your thoughts.
Log in to leave a comment.