Bethie
I get to have fun with this
With others all I can do is proclaim their beauty
With you, I have the idea that I can be artful
And more importantly-
You’ll still get it
And even if you don’t
You know well enough to know-
That isn’t even all that matters.
When I think of you I think of springtime
Vast swirls of yellow white and lime green
You have the same fire within you as the shallow little girl you play
You have the deepness within you that character seems to long for
I’m sure that’s why our beloved matron chose you.
You have such a compelling soul
You not only speak eloquently but you have the heart and spirit to back it up
People listen
And you are not as hollow as that role of intellectual portrays
I don’t know many who have the same dreaded complementarity
You are not fearful that your personality will ruin your image
It takes a truly brilliant person to acknowledge and run with that.
And you run and dance and laugh
You transport yourself to childhood and stake yourself to some deep spark that keeps you going when all else seems to try to stop
Even in your honesty that this silly little poem has the potential to excite you and make you happy-
It is so endearing, sincere and sweet, and you, in that excitement, brightened my day
Because you seem to have no fear in emoting
And that is sheer brilliance
At least if you ask me
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