Betrayed by a Name
Betrayed by a Name
I grew up lonely,
No-one to talk too.
I was just a name in the crowd.
I had green skin, a long nose,
But I was a kindly soul.
I didn’t have many friends,
And the ones I gained soon left.
They called me ‘ugly, rude, and spiteful.’
What no one ever knew was that I had a secret place,
A sanctuary one might say.
It was home, and where I always wished to stay.
Now children’s lives soon end, as the years drift pass,
But one thing never changed;
I was still lonely.
That all changed when a neighbor made a grave mistake;
He stole from my garden, my home, my sanctuary.
Everyone knew not to do this, yet he was a brave soul;
So I let him keep the small, golden flower:
But only under one condition:
The child his wife would soon bear,
Must be given to me.
Of course the man, fearing for his life,
Would make such a reckless deal.
He never knew he was dealing with a true,
Powerful, daring witch.
Soon, the baby girl was born,
But the village never rejoiced;
For they knew of his foolish deal.
And, on the third day after the child was born,
I went to claim what was rightfully mine.
Of course, (It was to be expected)
The man refused to give up the child.
So, I gave him one final chance.
He must guess my name.
Now, my name is one in a million,
Was a true feat of the human mind, and imagination.
And I never believed that a small town man would know what it is.
I was never so wrong.
On the first try, he said “Carla!”
I shook my head.
“Bellatrix?”
His voice cracked when I whispered “No.”
The man had one final chance, then I
Would never be alone again.
He begged me to let him have another try,
After his final guess, but I said no.
I may be kind, but I wanted this child desperately.
“I know!” The man threw his arms into the air.
“RUMPELSTILTSKIN!”
I screeched in anger, and despair, but he had succeeded
In my game of riddles.
“Now leave.”
I dragged my feet, but obeyed his command.
I, Rumpelstiltskin, was destined to forever
Be alone.
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