Better.
I'm sorry, I'm sorry,
Love, it's always 'I'm sorry'
Apologizing. Memorizing
Everything I did wrong
I'll be better, I'll be better
I'll be that and strong
It's me, It's me
Love, it's always me
Breaking, Shaking
Falling on my knees
I'll be better, I'll be better
I'll be that and freeze
I'll change, I'll change
Love, let me change
Renewing, undoing
All the mistakes i've made
I'll be better, I'll be better
I'll be that and saved
I'm yours, I'm yours
Love, I'm always yours
Alluring, Adoring
All you ever do
I'll be better, I'll be better
I'll be that for you
I'm better! I'm better!
Love, I swear I'm better!
Denying, lying
All because I try to improve
I'll be better, I'll be better
If its the last thing i do
I've failed, I've failed
Love, I fear i've failed
Scheming, bleeding
I've done what i promised not to
I'll be better, I'll be better
I'll be that soon
I'm tired, I'm tired.
Love, you know i'm tired.
Defeated, unsucceeded
Yet I know this is best
I'll be better, I'll be better
I'll be that and rest.
Well...
I trust you, I trust you
Love, I finally trust you
Believed, relieved
I can finally start to see
I'll be better, I'll be better
I'll be that and
Breathe
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▾ This Poem's Voice
Your Poem's Voice
PersonalThemeAbstract
Deeply personal relationship struggle; minimal philosophical abstraction present.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple layered ideas per stanza: apology, self-blame, change, exhaustion, redemption.
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly negative/conflicted until final stanza offers tentative hope.
StillEnergyExplosive
Repetitive exclamations, urgent tone, escalating emotional intensity throughout.
MicroLengthEpic
54 lines; falls within 31-60 range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Consistent metaphorical language: falling, breaking, bleeding; moderate ornamentation.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal monologue; direct address to 'Love' but introspective voice.
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