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Better version of wrong love 2


Bella's point of view As I walked to my class, I felt a pair of eyes looking straight at me. I turned around and saw no one which was weird since its school. I broke out running but the footsteps didn't stop, they keep getting closer and louder. I didn't stop until I got to my classroom. I slowly opened the door and saw... Jack's point of view "Ha ha ha ha", I said as I saw Bella dreaming "You really fell for that", I continued. I got up from my chair and walked around Bella touching her hair and her skin "So smooth", I smirked still touching her skin. After a while I stopped and sat back down in my chair... I got my face mask and hoddie getting ready from when Bella wakes up. "There now continue with your dreaming Bella", I announced with a smile really wide Bella's point of view I saw my teachers and classmates with knives and bows piercing right through their skin "What-the- f-", I confusingly said "H-o-w", I stumbled. I walked around everyone when I started to feel someone behind me...I tried to turn around but then I felt a piercing sense on my back. My body felt numb and sick, the next thing I know my body hit the floor. "Stupid girl", I hear a familiar voice say "Wait-", I stopped i-i felt my whole life being sucked into a blackhole. I suddenly wait up and saw a man in a hoodie with a face mask "Wh-o a-re y-o-u?", I nervously ask... Jack's point of view "Ugh you've awaken", I say in a deep voice "Wha-t d-o yo-u wan-t fr-om m-e?", Bella stumbly asked "Oh I want your love", I respond "Oh and I have a surprise", I continued "Ye-s?", Bella asked triggered "Your friend Luke", I say with a smirk as I pass her Luke's head. Bella grabs it but when she saw what it was she dropped it on the floor and started crying "Don't cry my dear ", I try to comfort her... Bella's point of view "WHY? UH TELL ME WHY? WHAT DID HE DO TO YOU?, I scream "Oh my dear don't scream, but your answer is that I felt threatened by him", the mysterious man said "URG HOW?", I still screamed "Chill dear", he said "How can I chill when my beast friend is dead? Huh?", I asked slowly and calmely "LOOK I LIKE YOU NO I LOVE YOU AND J WOULD KILL ANYONE WHO LOOKS AT YOU OR TOUCHES YOU! ", he screamed. I stopped and looked at the man and felt a feeling of terror "Someone Likes me?...and they would kill?", I thought to myself "Let me go", I whispered *Scoff * "What?"I asked "Fine I'll let you go", he said. As the words left his mouth I felt safer and calmer. The man came foward and untied the ropes around my hands and body. As soon as he was done I got up, I started run as fast as I could until I reached the exit. Jack's point of view "Hahaha", I laughed as I watched my crush run away from me "I'll be back for you", I continued with a smirk" "Oh how I want to kill someone else", I kept saying over and over. After 30 minutes I dropped my face mask on the floor and took my hoodie off. I felt the urge to see her again "Ah", I said as I thought about her Bella's point of view "That was really really weird", I said while running. After a while I got home, I took my keys out and i unlocked the door. I dropped my body on the couch and looked at the ceiling. "What a day?", I said sighing " and my best friend died",I said while getting teary *ding * I looked at my phone and saw the same phone number from before, it said "Did you enjoy the time with me?" "WHAT?!?", I shouted, I was so shocked that it was the same person but "Who is it?", I asked The next day James point of view "What did you do man?", I asked Jack "Oh nothing", he replied smiling "Oh your terrible at lying" I said "Hahaha", he said "TELL ME NOW DUDE?!?", I yelled "Chill dude...well I immediate kinda captured Bella and um killed Luke", Jack said whispering, as soon as I heard that I walked away. But then I stopped and headed back to Jack "How did you capture her?, I asked curiously "Um it started when I saw talking to Luke...so when he left and you left I went to look for Luke and when I finally saw him I stabbed him and took him to my apartment where I cut his head", Jack stopped as Bella walked by, she smiled and waved. "And?", I asked "Oh right, then I went to ask for Bella's phone number, when I got it I send her 9 messages, and I saw her reading them. When the bell rang I went up to her and said 'Hey can you try this? I made it", then she said "Oooooh cookies I love cookies...sure", she said as she grabbed the cookie. The second she tasted it she fainted and ta dah", Jack continued whispering Dude you weirdo ", I said as I walked away Bella's point of view I saw James and Jack talking together. I thought about what they were talking when I realized today we're going out. "Oof how could I forget?", I thought. I didn't realize I started to walk toward them...I smiled and waved as I past them. Jack gave a slight smile. At that moment my heart melted with love. Jack's point of view "If only you knew Bella if only you knew", I said.
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