A Better World

by G0 4 1t

November 29, 2019

We build together

A masterpiece

A better world,

Building for eternity

Some make great things

For all to see

Others do more

And want nothing more

Than to see it done

Some fight against us

But we fight back

For a better world

What we all lack

We make it better, and better, and better

Maybe not perfect

But better is good

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S.zaynab.kNov 29, 2019

<p>We can build a better world yes if we work for it in unity and peace yes. You wrote a great message poem  here. Thumbs up. </p><div><p><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13px; line-height: 18.200000762939453px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; background-color: rgb(238, 238, 238);">Pls pleez. do review// comment my newest poem too, even though commenting is not common here but it's nice to hear from fellow humanity right?</span></p><div><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13px; line-height: 18.200000762939453px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; background-color: rgb(238, 238, 238);">, </span></div></div><p> </p>