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In between

October 28, 2025

In between - breaths, tiks words, time, life. in between space between you and me I felt like I lose myself, the ground and I am in free fall between yesterday and tomorrow ahead of me there was no you anymore You were stuck in no time; some where how I wish I knew that in between'd be a safe space for us all.

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Personal loss and separation with some abstract philosophical questioning about liminal spaces

Multiple interconnected ideas: loss, free fall, temporal displacement, separation, longing for safety

Predominantly melancholic; loss, free fall, absence of beloved create despair with faint hope

Moderate tension from free fall imagery and fragmented pacing; restrained by contemplative tone

Approximately 9-10 lines depending on line breaks; falls in 7-15 range

Free fall metaphor, safe space concept, temporal abstraction; some ornamentation but unpolished

Pure lyric internal voice expressing subjective emotional experience without dramatic distance

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