Between Three Trees

by angelicalopez1

July 16, 2013

The calmness of the bay eased the ocean within me,

The birds singing put my spirit at ease,

Tears rolled down my eyes,

I felt the cool air hugging me,

As the sun's rays struggled to get to where I was,

The little shaded place between three trees.

Where I sat and starred at calmness,

Purity,

Peace.

It was nature's way of consoling me.

Everything is going to be OK,

The wind whispered,

Everything is going to be OK.

Something wrong with this poem?

Replies are closed for this poem.

Your Poem's Voice

See what makes your poem unique — its voice, energy, themes, and the literary traditions it draws from.

Comments (2)

angelicalopez1Oct 3, 2013

<p>Thank you for your feedback. I was going through a lot (emotional problems) when I wrote this poem. I feel that it kind of wrote itself. It helped me get out of my inside the tornado that I felt. I realized that sometimes we have a problem and then our minds and emotions, blow it out of proportion. thank you and I'm sorry I had not responded before, I'm figuring out how to use the website. Take care :)</p>

emberphoenixJul 16, 2013

<p>i really like this poem! it's simple and beautiful</p>