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Why is it that in order to be intelligent one must do something big?
In English one is deemed gifted if they use large, complex words
In math one is considered a genius if they solve big, complex equations
In science one is intelligent if and only if they make a large impact on the facts we know today
Why must everything be big?
If I was to write a poem
And say
“The flowers smelled wonderful”
Would that not be enough
Have I not made my point
Am I not understood
Clear, concise, comprehended by all.
Why must I take something so
Effortlessly simple and
Ruin it?
Why must I say
“The aroma of the magnoliophytas floated pleasantly into my nose, tickling my olfactory glands”
So many unnecessary words
So confusing
So stupid-oh wait
Stupid isn’t descriptive enough.
How about
Absurd, superfluous, ridiculous, imprudent, thoughtless?
All mean the same thing.
But why is one the right choice
While the other is not.
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