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Birthday Surprise


It was the day before my birthday

That I made a big mistake

I told you how I felt

And you got mad at me

You said I had no reason

To be upset with you

 

You said you know how I feel

Because you feel that way too

But it’s for another girl

A girl that isn’t me

You said I can’t force someone

To feel the same things

I said I know and I’m sorry

And we should stop talking

You say if that’s what I want

And ‘goodbye Victoria

See ya next year’

 

But hopefully I won’t

Because it hurts to much to see you

It hurts too much to know

That you love that other girl

And I hope one day

That she loves you back

Because I don’t want you to feel

The way that I do anymore

 

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