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as black as the raven.


“ i think hair as black as the raven! is quite cliche. i never really understood why someone would compare a the beauty of one’s hair to such a murder. this was until i met you. your hair , gold flecks in the sunlight , i swear you are prettier than any bird that great ! and when i hold you , i can still smell parts of shampoo and MY GOD!  this is what i have been asking for ! i thank all the heavens each and every night for sending down one of their perfect cherubs to me, for i am ethereal when i am with you .  ♡ “

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avery.riane

a honey-eyed pixie ♡

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avery.riane
<p>thank you !&nbsp;<span style="background-color: rgb(234, 230, 222); color: rgb(66, 66, 66); font-family: Lato; font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">♡</span></p>
coolidris
<p>That&#39;s a nice poem you wrote about a cherub that you really like.</p>

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