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Blind Castles


“ Blind Castles”

by Cane-Go Hines


 

Blind castles in the sky

Everynite I try to build them so high

These castles or dreams only belong to U & I

Can’t wait to see the blind castles gates open before my eyes

When I sleep these castles always seems to fly

How hard do I have to try to catch my castles in the sky?

 

Inside these castles my family lies

To provide for them is where my dreams come alive

Blind castles in the sky, I yet to see

No one can say how important these are to u & me

These castles are blind cuz they haven’t revealed themselves

But when they do some of my worries would have left

Castles in the sky why aren’t you here yet?

 

I’m I not looking with the right eyes?

I’m trying my best to do the right things, if so where’s my prize?

Oh my blind castles in the sky you’re what keeps me alive

Take a moment and think about how your castle looks

What a beautiful thing, I love to describe

My blind castles in the sky

 

One brick at a time my castle will rise

I can see this place but still seem so far away

What will it feel like when I see that day?

My blind castles in the sky.

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