Blizzards
Oh Blizzards how I hate you so
Eighteen inches, twenty-four iches, so much snow
For the kids at school, you're an off day
For us adults, this nor'easter is a royal pain
James and Dave have the forecast and they say the snow won't stop
It will be a significant weather and our area is the jackpot
So remember to go to the gas station and get your gas tank filled
And be like Vic and go to the store to get the bread and milk
But remember that you still have to go to work
Even though driving in this mess is more trouble than it's worth
You will be sliding down a steep hill on solid ice
Do you think your greedy employers care if you live or die?
The storm will topple trees and knock out power
You will have no electricity for several hours
The power may be out for days or even weeks
It's a miserable experience, in the winter without heat
You go outside on the sidewalk and you slip and fall
For this latest storm, there is just never enough salt
Now the fun really starts and you have to dig yourself out
But you only have a snow shovel, when you need a snow blower or snow plow
Things will get back to normal in about a week
In meantime as we drive, we try to navigate through very narrow streets
Mountains of snow as far as the eye can see
We just got hammered by this unrelenting beast
From Rhymes With A Reason
Copyright 2018 Resisting Distress Publishing
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Highly personal complaint about winter blizzards and their impact on daily life.
Multiple distinct ideas packed densely: snowfall amounts, school closures, forecasts, safety concerns, power outages, shoveling.
Strongly negative throughout: hatred, pain, misery, danger, sliding, greedy employers, unrelenting beast.
Moderate intensity with emphatic declarations and urgent imperatives; passionate complaint but not explosive language.
32 lines of verse; falls in the 31-60 line range.
Some metaphor ('hammered by this unrelenting beast') and occasional imagery; mostly declarative and direct speech.
Primarily lyric internal voice expressing personal grievance; references to named people (James, Dave, Vic) add slight narrative grounding.
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