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Bloom


These trees. These trees of red. They tear me, scorn me, and weaken me Wrapped in fences a thousand feet tall. Their thorns laced in the very essence of envy, soil my soul My blood stains the trees crimson. But I look toward the sun to the day when it will all be okay. For these trees won’t stand together forever and when they part I will be a bud from the definition of strength. The trees, singularly, are just twigs They will only ever be crimson stained twigs And I will bloom
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Comments (8)

Jan Wienen
<p>Unusual</p>
17anmorgan
<p>I love your choice of words. Very amazing poem.</p>
hopefuldreamer
This is wonderful! Very relatable. Love the metaphor.
ImmortalNighttime
Deep!!
savigirl14
<p>This poem is very beautiful I can picture this scene and thank you for describing it</p>
GGicefire
<p>The weak can only grow stronger</p><p>While the strong will never change.</p><p>They will look up one day,</p><p>To see us rising over them.</p><p>We will fly. Then, they will regret</p><p>Calling us Weaklings.</p><p>Then, because they need our help, our mercy.</p><p>And we will show them kindness--</p><p>We will not be like they were.</p><p>The weak will one day be the strongest of all.</p><p>You have captured it--</p><p>One day, yes,</p><p>We will bloom.</p>
Angelwith1wing
<p>Beautiful poem! I like the use of allusion and diction that you use in this poem. It really does draw the reader into the speaker's&nbsp;sight and mind. Keep writing on my friend!</p>
marysitz
<p>I love this poem! &nbsp;Thanks so much for sharing it with PowerPoetry.org.&nbsp;</p>

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