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Blue Ridge Mountains (Haiku)

by 931535

  • The rolling blue ridges
  • Reach to the heavens to touch the clouds-- 
  • The hikers' heavy breath. 
 
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AK123654
<p>I really like this poem&#39;s images. The description of the mountains and then directly</p><p>cutting to the hiker is really great. The imagery of the ridges is very powerful. The</p><p>hiker, I can also see really clearly without too much description. I am not a huge fan</p><p>of the bullet points, mostly because I can&#39;t figure out what their purpose is. The poem</p><p>itself is great it&#39;s really just the bullet points.</p>

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