The Blues

by Clarisa

June 29, 2016

I'm feeling blue,

People avoid me like the flu.

I really wanted to be you,

But you told me to get a clue.

So after that experience I grew.

I'm glad you helped me breakthrough.

Because now I feel brand new

Now I know you're the wrong idol, YAHOO!

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Comments (4)

ClarisaJun 29, 2016

Out of curiousity why did you think it was about him? I added this poem for people suffering from depression I never even tagged him in the poem, and the cause didn't say anything about him being involved?

ClarisaJun 29, 2016

Actually I wrote this poem years ago, it's not about Robin William's at all I don't know who that is as a matter of fact. But if I offended you in anyway I'm sorry. I wrote this poem for people who look up to someone, but they turn out not to be who they tought they were.

graciefflerJun 29, 2016

<p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: inherit; color: rgb(37, 37, 37);">"Because now I feel brand new<p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: inherit; color: rgb(37, 37, 37);">Now I know you're the wrong idol, YAHOO!" If this is supposed to be about Robin Williams, it's really insensitive.

graciefflerJun 29, 2016

"Because now I feel brand new<p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: inherit; color: rgb(37, 37, 37);">Now I know you're the wrong idol, YAHOO!" If this is supposed to be about Robin Williams, it's really insensitive.