Boat Poem
I had to wake up early for this
I would have much rather keep my ignorance of this as it was bliss
I’m stuck in a color blind confused neon orange raft, as I don’t call this a boat
With the amount of water in it, it shouldn’t even float
It’s too hot and bright
Forgot my sunglasses to dim the light
The bugs are everywhere
While I want them nowhere near
From all this paddling my arms are sore
I really don’t want to do this any more
I sat and stared around me
And all around me were cat tails and water as far as I could see
My family farther ahead
While I just wanted to head back to bed
But then I saw my little brother
And got stuck in a pep talk (see: scolding) from my mother
And my outlook on this whole thing sort of changed
With another look at my brother my thoughts were rearranged
This was for him not myself and I couldn’t let him down
So I turned my boat and mood around
And raced after him
In the end I enjoyed myself even if the chances were slim
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